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Post by silverfrost on Dec 29, 2016 18:45:40 GMT
Name: Silverfrost Clan:Obsidianclan Moons:20 Rank:Deputy (Olivia Approved) Mother:Not known Father:Not known Appearance:Silver, sleek grey she-cat. White paws and a small white chest and underbelly.Blue icey eyes and dark grey stripes on her pelt. Bio: She was once a loner when 8 moons, she was eager to join Obsidianclan and train to help her other clanmates.She had never known her parents when she was a kit, an older friend of hers, which decided to stay like a loner, raised her until she left to someplace else. She still visits him late at night secretly. Besides that, she is loyal to her clan.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2016 19:03:47 GMT
Deputy has already been taken it's been taken for some time now. Ollie plays the deputy Foxshade. ALso I noticed you didn't use the character application provided. Your missing gender, personality, and history. I see your bio is kind of like a history. Can you please put more information in there? How come she doesn't know her parents? Who was this loner who raised her? How did the loner come to have her? How did she come to join Obsidianclan? Please put as many details as possible in her history. Also if you could find a picture that would be great.
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Post by ☀ Oliveheart ☀ on Dec 29, 2016 22:42:36 GMT
silverfrost is very new to the way forum roleplays work <3 She'll get the hang of it in no time, just like everyone else :3 Okay so yea, you need to use the form that was given to you in the Character Application topic: [b]Name[/b]:
[b]Gender[/b]:
[b]Age[/b]:
[b]Rank[/b]:
[b]Clan[/b]: (Ravineclan & Nightclan are Temporarily Closed)
[b]Appearance[/b]:
[b]Brief Appearance[/b]: (like in the allegiances of the warrior cat books)
[b]Personality[/b]:
[b]History[/b]: As for high positions, I do remember I said I would give you a high position, but that was when the site was being first started and they hadn't all been taken, I'm sorry Longtail :/ (hope you don't mind me calling you by your facebook name XD) If you want to be a medicine cat, I'm pretty sure that in NightClan two more medicine cat slots are open? Isn't that correct, @firefly?
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Post by silverfrost on Jan 3, 2017 21:40:08 GMT
Name:Silverfrost Gender:She-cat Age: 20 moons Rank:Medicine cat Clan:(I'll take any clan!) Appearance:pretty face,average length fur Brief Appearance: Silver she-cat with light and dark markings around pelt with blue eyes Personality:Witty, snappy and caring. History:Silverfrost,as a loner,called, Frost, had cases of amnesia (which made her forget about her parents).Frost had a talent of healing rouges passing by, who told her about (insert clan).She was told that a friend of her father's, , was chosen to take care for her before he dies.She then set off to (insert clan)to join them and promised she will meet him at a small ravine, twice a moon. (If you want me to add more, I'll write more) (I'll get her picture as my profile)
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Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2017 21:57:30 GMT
I'm sorry but Medicine cat is also taking. Besides you must buy high ranking positions now from the shop.
Please put more detail in the appearance. If you need help feel free to look at any of the other character bios for examples, at least a few sentences.
Please be more descriptive with her personality, at least a few sentences
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Post by silverfrost on Jan 8, 2017 23:57:19 GMT
Name:Silverfrost Gender:She-cat Age: 20 moons Rank:Warrior Clan:Obsidianclan Appearance:Light silver she-cat with thin , dark silver streaks on her flank. White snowy dashes on her paws, with an unusual vein popping from her shoulder. White splotches on her tail with icy blue eyes. Personality:Witty at fighting, espicially rouges. Hates being ignored, she would keep repeating the exact same thing until she gets her way. Fiesty and gives off sass whenever she can with older warriors. History:Silverfrost,as a loner,called, Frost, had cases of amnesia (which made her forget about her parents).Frost had a talent of healing rouges passing by, who told her about Obsidianclan.She was told that a friend of her father's, , was chosen to take care for her before he dies.She then set off to Obsidianlan to join them and she promised she will meet him at a small ravine, twice a moon. (If you want me to add more, I'll write more) (I'll get her picture as my profile)
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Post by ☀ Oliveheart ☀ on Jan 9, 2017 2:55:52 GMT
Accepted :3 I feel like it should be cleaned up a bit, but it will definitely do. If you have any questions, pm me or Firefly ^^ Have fun! And keep in mind ObsidianClan is a savage clan X3
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