A Starlit Night (Doesky)

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Bluehawk stood on a branch high above the clearing keeping watch over his clan. There was only one kit in the clan right now and Snowkit was in no shape to play with yet. She was still healing and scared of everyone. The only one she seemed to begin trusting was Nightsnow. Maybe with time the medicine cat could get her to open up and trust that they wouldn't hurt her. Mean while he sat watching and waiting for a certain she-cat. It was still early, just after dusk and others where still beginning to awaken. His whiskers twitched in anticipation of seeing Doesky. The two had begun to grow close ever since he had found her in the forest. He blinked seeing movement in the distance but sighed seeing it was only Nightstar padding to the fresh-kill pile. He was surprised she never ate first.. ah he saw now she was carrying it to Nightsnow's den. That was the Nightstar he knew and looked up to. Bluehawk had been so a tuned to Nightstar that he never noticed Doesky step out of her den. When he did spot her his ears pricked up and he launched himself down the tree and slowly padded towards her. "Good night Doesky, how are you on this fine night?"

@fawntail

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She padded out of her den from a nap ready to go hunting at night."I'm fine Bluehawk, how are you?" she purred. She sat down staring into his eyes as hers gleamed.

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Bluehawk smiled at the sound of her voice, "I'm glad your doing good, I am fine as well. Do you think you would be interested in hunting with me?" His icy blue eyes gleamed in the moons light as he hoped she would say yes to hunting with him.

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She purrs happily,"Sure ,Bluehawk, I would love to hunt with you." her pelt glimmered in the light as her eyes shone kindly towards him smiling.

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His ears pricked up when she said sure and his smile widened. "That's great, where would you like to hunt? We could stay in the forest or go out and hunt in the meadow." Maybe he could even teach her how to fish in the stream that cut through the meadow. It wasn't very big but it was about three or four times his length. It was crystal clear and you could see tiny fish darting through it.


(Can you try to write a little more maybe be a bit more descriptive tell us what she's thinking and what not.)

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Quietly she sat thinking about where she wanted to go. Her tail flicked as the thought. Trying to make a decision her eyes gleamed with confusion. She meowed quite quietly, "We can go to the meadow... If that's okay with you." She tilted her head longing to leave the camp feeling as she had been there forever. As she waited she thought of when she lived with her family. Her brothers never let her hunt and now she looks at her self , hunting to feed a whole clan. Her eyes gleamed proudly.

(Like this x3 Sorry I'm still new to this)

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Blueheart waited patiently, hoping she would say the meadow for there were less things for his long fur coat to get caught on out in the open meadow. His tail twitched at the sound of her voice saying they could go to the meadow. "Excellent idea, in fact, I was hoping you would say that. I'll lead the way."] He winked at her then led the way out of the circle of trees that his clan called home and began to make the short trek through the forest out to the meadow. It was slight but eventually the trees began to thin out until they opened up to the meadow. He always thought it was a beautiful site without all the tree's blocking their view of the night sky. "Look at that moon it's still full, but tomorrow there will be the slightest bite out of the moon. And then it will grow smaller and smaller until there is no moon what so ever for a night before it begins to grow once more."

(Much Better ^_^)


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