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Post by Deleted on Dec 24, 2016 4:28:27 GMT
《CURRENT INFROMATION》 ShatteredIce ▪Prefix Meaning▪Shattered:Broken into many pieces, damaged or destroyed. ▪Sufix Meaning▪Ice:frozen and transparent. <Age> 19moons <Gender> female <Rank> warrior <Lives> errm one
《PAST INFROMATION》 <Past names> Arrow <Past ranks> kittypet/loner <Past clans> n/a <Past lives> formerly a free kept kitty.
《FUTURE INFROMATION》 <Future names> n/a <Future ranks> senior warrior, Elder... <Future clans> n/a
《APPEARANCE》 <Brief and detailed description of appearance>
<Size> ▪Height from paw to ear▪13 inches ▪Length from nose to tail▪20 inches ▪Weight▪9.2 pounds ▪Muscular build of cat▪ Is slim, with wiry built frame. Is strong but do to size and lack of bulk skill focus is agility.
<Pelt> ▪Colors▪White based tabby. Gold amber optics. ▪Length▪Short ▪Texture▪Silky ▪Pattern▪Strips
<Eyes> ▪Size▪Normal ▪Shape▪Round ▪Colors▪amber gold ▪Pattern▪amber fading to golden butter hues.
<Ears and ear fur> ▪Size▪Normal ▪Shape▪rounded points ▪Texture of fur▪Fluffy smooth ▪Length of fur▪slightly longer ▪Looks of fur▪soft
<Nose> ▪Size▪Normal(slightly small) ▪Color▪pale bubble gum pink ▪Shape▪edgy heart
<Whiskers> ▪Length▪Average ▪Color▪white/transparent ▪Style▪normal
<Limbs> ▪Size▪Long ▪Build▪lanky
<Tail> ▪Type▪normal ▪Length▪few inches(short furred)
<Paws/Pads> ▪Size▪Little more than an inch ▪Color▪black ▪Texture▪smooth(kind of a worn leather) ▪Shape▪normal
<Claws and fangs> ▪Claw shape▪hook ▪Claw size▪pretty normal ▪Claw length▪less than an inch ▪Claw color▪clear/yellowed ▪Claws missing/Broken▪n/a ▪Fang shape▪curved ▪Fang size▪Normal ▪Fang color▪white/yellowed ▪Fangs missing/broken▪n/a
<Scars> ▪From battles▪on left hip(jagged but short) ▪From training▪n/a ▪From accidents▪has a scar along the top of her right hanch from slipping. ▪Physical Deformities▪n/a
<Extra> ▪Scent of cat▪ earthy&pine
《PERSONALITY》 <Brief and detailed Decription of personality> ▪Stubborn- is beyond stubborn! once set on something is unlikely to fade from her choice.period. ▪Sassy- is super sassy along the lines of an amused/ing teasing. She isn't easily angered so any form of not happiness she has will show in some sassy retort. ▪Bright- not exactly chipper but she is happy I mean why not? she isn't optimistic she thinks everything has a rough and easy time regardless of what happening. So bright as in warm and often open. <Mental health of cat>Pretty sane <Mental disabilities>n/a <Dreams>Hope for a mate, and kits. <Fears>Is scared of thunder!
《CLAN INTERACTIONS》 ▪Leader▪BloodPelt ▪Deputy▪Snowtail ▪Medicine cat▪Spottedfire ▪Medicine cat apprentice▪Mintleaf ▪Senior warriors▪n/a ▪Regular warriors▪n/a ▪New warriors▪Meh ▪Apprentices▪n/a ▪Queens▪n/a ▪Kits▪n/a ▪Elders▪n/a ▪Loners▪n/a ▪Rogues▪n/a ▪Kittypets▪n/a ▪Tribe cats▪n/a ▪Other clan's cats▪n/a ▪Prey▪n/a ▪Animal threats▪n/a ▪Twolegs▪n/a ▪Beliefs▪Is not a believer of star clan. She is loyal and strong for her clan but not being raised with them has lead to a nonbelief of there ansesters. ▪Extra▪n/a
《A DAY IN THE LIFE》 ▪Dawn(5am-7am)▪Waking for dutys ▪Sunrise(7am-11am)▪Ready for hunt or patrol ▪Sunhigh(11am-1pm)▪wrapping up hunt or patrol ▪Sunset(1pm-5pm)▪returns, and eats her fill. ▪Dusk(5pm-8pm)▪Sharing of tounge with her clanmates ▪Twilight(8pm-10pm)▪Settles ▪Moonrise(10pm-11pm)▪Sleeps ▪Moonhigh(11pm-1am)▪Snoring ▪Moonfall(1am-4am)▪Still being a log
《Past》 <A brief detailed description of the cats past>
▪Birth▪Born of kitty pet (Glass) and (Snow) ▪Early kithood▪Grew up in a house hold of two, twolegs and there single smaller kit. Was able to see mother and father from time to time. No sibling contact. ▪Late kithood▪Growing up she wanted adventure but was confined to the house den. ▪Early apprenticeship▪n/a Growing she was given a chance and escaped from her cushy life. She lived as a loner for some time and enjoyed the solitude. Though this was until she found the clans. ▪Late apprenticeship▪Was briefly trained, though she was able to hunt and fight to a rather impressive extent as it was. ▪Newly made warrior▪Started to get used to the clan and her new mates. ▪New warrior▪She was given a new name, no longer arrow of the humans. But ShatteredIce after her parents... she was loving it. To hunt for others, and to fight with a purpose. ▪New Regular warrior▪Shock wore off and life drew into a rhythm ▪Regular warrior▪Starts to fall in love with the idea of love! and hope to gain such a bond with in her clan. ▪Senior regular warrior▪n/a ▪New senior warrior▪n/a ▪Senior warrior▪n/a ▪Senior senior warrior▪n/a ▪New elder▪n/a ▪Elder▪n/a ▪Late elder▪n/a ▪Death▪n/a
《RELATIONS》 ▪Grandparents▪Don't know ▪Moms▪Glass ▪Dads▪Snow ▪Aunts▪n/a ▪Uncles▪n/a ▪Sisters▪Angle ▪Brothers▪Flint ▪Nieces▪n/a ▪Nephews▪n/a ▪Mates▪(OPEN) ▪Kits▪(OPEN) ▪Grandkits▪n/a ▪Mentors▪n/a ▪Apprentices▪(OPEN) ▪Best friends▪(OPEN) ▪Friends▪(OPEN) ▪Acquaintances▪n/a ▪Rivals▪n/a ▪Enemies▪n/a ▪Crushes▪n/a ▪Crushers▪n/a
《LIKES AND DISLIKES》 <Likes> ▪Prey:Rabbit ▪Time of day:Morning ▪Weather:fallish sunny but cool ▪Types of cats:just not snoty ▪Extra:n/a
<Dislikes> ▪Prey▪fish ▪Weather▪bitter cold/extreme heat ▪Time of day▪ late late night, mean I can't sleep ▪Type of cats▪Snots ▪Extra-Thunder
《Skills》 Hunting: 4/10 Fighting: 10/10 Stregth: 6/10 Agility: 10/10 Tracking: 3/10 Swimming:2 /10 Climbing: 4/10 Healing: 2/10 Strategy: 8/10 Intelligence: 9/10 Stamina: 8/10 Mother/fatherlyness: 8/10
《Extra》 <Quotes>n/a <Sayings>Everything has a darkside. <Life themes>Snowflakes melt.
《Roleplay example》
Major stumbled along the beat-up path that led to the infamous mountains that loomed intimidatingly over the whole forest. His soul burning eyes flashed back and forth and he mumbled to himself. He twitched his scarred and tattered ears as incoherent whispers and mutters swirled in them. Out of the corner of his eye, she saw a rock with eyes following his every move. Overhead, trees tried to bend down and grab him, but he paid them no mind. Major was familiar with all of this already. He was Mad.... With his loose grip on reality, the alpha male stalked on. Not that far from where he saw the creepy rock, he saw a silhouette seemingly dancing before him. he thought that it was nonexistent, that it was part of his imagination, like everything else. So, like the fearless yet somehow a little idiotic male-wolf he was. Major jogged after it. The branches and dirt tried calling him back, make him slow down and chat with them, but he did not oblige. The wolf continued on to meet this new creation of his. Only to burst thought a shimmering clearing and find Young Female Apprentice in witch he had not yet to meet.
《Notes from the creator》 Love all you cat loving freaks XD
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Post by Deleted on Dec 24, 2016 7:43:29 GMT
For Hunting that's a typo it's supposed to be /10 I'll fix that come morning.
For Mother/Fatherliness you can't go higher than 10
Also she seems to be good at too many things.
Only 1/12 of their skills are under 5. No cat is that good at everything. She needs to be weaker at some things. Like for example a cat who's great at fighting might not be as good of a hunter or a someone who's good at hunting might not be that great of a fighter. And because she's so thin and lanky I don't think she would be very strong and you have her at a 6. Another is since she's a warrior and was a kittypet before joining I highly doubt she would know anything about healing. I mean she could know the absolute basics but even then I doubt she would be above a 3. If you want to keep it higher you'll need to explain how she learned all the herbs and healing skills she has.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 25, 2016 19:36:01 GMT
Sorry I was just trying to be funny with the mother and father one LOL I'll change them right now.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 25, 2016 21:24:42 GMT
Oh ok lol ^_^
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