Snowthorn- Torchclan

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Name: Snowthorn

Gender: Male

Age: 18 Moons

Rank: Warrior

Clan: Torchclan

Appearance: Snowthorn is a large tom, with large ears and huge paws. His coat is pure white in color and his inner ears and nose are bright pink. He has eyes that consist of an amber color with a pinkish hue due to his albinism.

Brief Appearance: Large white tom with amber eyes.

Personality: Snowthorn is fiercely loyal to his clan and is willing to do anything within his power to please his superiors. He also goes out of his way to help other clan members whenever need be. He craves approval and a simple word of encouragement can make him happy for a week. He is also a pushover, and adores kits. 

History: Snowthorn was born and raised in Torchclan. His parents were Nighttail and Redfeather. He was born during leaf-bare and was the only kit in his litter. Due to the season he was born in he started out life very small and frail. However once he started training with his mentor, Goldbreeze, he began to build muscle and strength and grew into the large size he is now. He is very inexperienced in battle, other than the training he did as an apprentice, he has only been in two very minor skirmishes on the border of Torchclan.

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Okay it has been edited to reflect a more appropriate length. If I need to add more just let me know!

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Much better thank you ^_^