Onyxstar

[Bolt]

Name: OnyxStar

Gender: Male

Sexual Preferance: Attrected to opposite gender

Age: 43 moons

Rank: Leader

Clan: ObsidianClan

Appearance: 

Brief Appearance: (like in the allegiances of the warrior cat books) He has a fawn, black, and grey pelt in a tabby pattern. His eyes are a fiery orange.

Personality:  He is basicly evil in every sense of the word. He enjoys killing and torturing cats. While he does have some love for his clan he is not afraid to exploit anybody

History: As a kit he played with his friends but was eventully confined to the nursery after he tried to hurt one. When he was an apprentice he was never teased and cats often stayed away from him due to the fact that they saw him once catch a mouse and let it die slowly while he watched. As a warrior he has not done much but he does often hunt  and is good at fighting. He is able to inflict a sudden fear within a five foot radius that makes him seem much scary and larger. He was deputy of ObsidianClan for a short time but ObsidianStar went insane and was killed by RavineStar. He is the newly appointed leader and picked Foxshade to be deputy. (He can control how much fear cats feel, for the lowest would make them slightly uncomfterbale and the highest would require extreme willpower to resist to run or cower or freeze in fear. [possible but hard]) 

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ACCEPTED

Are you going to change it to star? Since he is the leader?

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Bolt I'm not sure about this new power I think it might be to much. I'll tag Ollie and lets see what he thinks.

☀ Oliveheart ☀ - Bolt has decided to edit the powers of Onyxstar and I want to get your ok because if it was up to me I'd say no but since this is your site I'll let you have the final decision.

Edited Part: His eyes when in a normal mood are their normal bright Orange but when at his comand (Sometimes it happens uncontroled) his eyes start to smolder and burn until they revil his socket. When this happens his body is able to handle much more stress and pain and his other senses are hightened and he can only rely on those (He enters a rage and is only able to stop when fighting/other thing stops) (He can turn it on but it is quite hard to turn it off) Also his eyes regenerate or grow back about 45 minutes after they burn

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I'm going to say no again you should be allowed to edit your cat after it's accepted. You don't see other people editing theirs so they can make their cat stronger and better. It's not fair to other members.